Open Poetry #33 |
Inspired thoughts-- |
Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
INSPIRED At a distance Unbeknownst to him I see him. Lightning strikes. A shock passes Thru my body. Strangely Electrified, I move on, Energized For the day, Inspired. And he never Knew That I drew My strength From him. ATTRACTION My eyes followed him Across the room. Totally focused, Ignoring everything Around me. Nothing else matters. HOPE A new relationship Renews all hope And uplifts The flagging spirits Of those discouraged, Broken-hearted, Interminably rehashing “Why didn't that work?” Afraid to hope, But irresistibly drawn To an understanding heart Communicating without words Spirits resonating, Eyes brightening Flashing With new energy. Remember to Nurture and protect This caring. Respecting. Sharing. This recognition of worth. And the world Seems less bleak, Less frightening, Less chilling. The heart Slowly heals. Shenachie 12 July 2004 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..a new relationship, perhaps leading to a new love.. heals the heart, lifts the spirit. Love this Bridget..very much enjoyed. Heart Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Funny how one can be caught and inspired by the essence of another -- well said. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bridget Beautiful and insightful writing...thank you for the energy within it. |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
I love this! Well done! Kelly We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bridget, this was really wonderful. It brought to mind a very strong romance I had which definitely inspired me! ....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The heart Slowly heals. ~*~ In this all, I sense compassion, sensitivity, and that underlying foundation of hope... to never give up, to never quit. Bless your heart. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This is so beautiful....I don't have words to say how truly it speaks to me....I felt an instant resonance with the truth in this. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was gripping, to know you feel that strongly...I hope he lives up to your expectations...and you both live a joined life forever. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bridget - yes you're right. The heart does heal .... on it's own time. This is a wonderful piece of writing. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes they can do that, without knowing |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...indeed inspired...James |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I've not been able to read you for a while, but it is always good to do so...and to read of hope. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Afraid to hope, But irresistibly drawn To an understanding heart Communicating without words Spirits resonating, Eyes brightening Flashing With new energy. Remember to Nurture and protect This caring. Respecting. Sharing. This recognition of worth. And the world Seems less bleak, Less frightening, Less chilling. The heart Slowly heals. Yes... it does. *S* This is so very beautiful... excellent work!! |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
Amazing how the Human psyche needs to bond and the heart forever searches and forgives This is beautiful |
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