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Open Poetry #33

water song ink

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-30 07:59 AM

circle sigh shivers
whirlwind with lace
and eye sides glance

I sip the wine
of a jaguar perversion
and my beard is wax then

you knock on my stones
and finger prick the locks
begging for salvation

you say lighthouse backwards
and turn them off
with the windows open

when morning hears you sing
I am the ink on your back
riding low in your saddle

and you are water song poems
_____________

Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-30 08:30 AM

reading you is like watching a movie
with glowing metaphors of human emotion
Cool!

Good Morning

Wishing you a grrrr8 Day!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-09-30 08:37 AM

Morning without your words just wouldn't seem right....grinz....as always Dark one, I enjoyed the visions...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-30 10:46 AM

Mmmmm - bathing in the visions stirred here-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-09-30 10:50 AM

DS

"you say lighthouse backwards"

I tried to do this, but couldn't.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2004-09-30 10:53 AM

PS....saying lighthouse backwards is

house light

winking as the plot thickens

thanks to all of you for your reviews

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-30 11:25 AM

a wow write

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2004-09-30 01:23 PM

you know I am keeping this one, right??

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