Open Poetry #33 |
In Kaleidoscope Fashion |
~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
There is no end to this path where we connect still lines blur on further inspection this strain infects to promote our perfection outside the wall it all falls like they predicted in kaleidoscope fashion we enter tomorrow |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love it! Great imagery and perspective! Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow! What a way to enter into tomorrow! I enjoyed your words and will be looking for more from you. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Morrison would have loved this, K |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very nice rhythmic flow, K |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Invoking thought and contemplation in this reader's mind. Thanks for sharing! Robert Joseph |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
there is always something haphazard about discovery and progression... and youve written of it beautifully... "in kaleidoscope fashion" you know thats an awesome line |
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