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two fists down and to the left |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 photo©d.doss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Snow, this is a good one. Enjoyed the read. :-) |
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klm Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 58New Orleans, Atlanta |
this art of yours lights up the heart, the mind and engages the individual prisms of interpretation. exceptional. kenneth The true poet writes to express, not impress. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
how gently comes tomorrow, while it bares teeth Yes! I feel it too. Love the above lines Snow.  Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow!! love the pic love it all |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Excellent!! "How gently..." - yes, indeed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a gift written from the soul with an echo of eloquence |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadySnow~ From the welcoming doormat title ... right down through the all of it ... poignant~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
how gently comes tomorrow, while it bares teeth EXCELLENT! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! lovin this great imagery, intriguing write and photo |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Snow, I walked in the words, through a few reads...I'm rewarded by your gift. Robert Joseph |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi sweetie. Mmm! I have read this, and reread it, and I just wanted to say... As you can see I am at a loss for words on this piece. There is a silent ache within my heart that wants to scream..."No...it can't end that way!"...and part of me says, "Yes! It makes perfect sense." I think in part it is the picture. There is such a sadness in it. At least that is what I feel when I look at it. You do these too perfectly love. See what you do to me? Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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