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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-09-29 12:20 PM

photo©d.doss

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-09-29 12:51 PM

Enjoyed...James

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2004-09-29 01:07 AM

Hey Snow,
this is a good one.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

klm
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta

3 posted 2004-09-29 01:32 AM

this art of yours lights up the heart, the mind and engages the individual prisms of interpretation. exceptional.

kenneth

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-09-29 02:17 AM

how gently comes
tomorrow, while it
bares teeth

Yes!

I feel it too. Love the above lines Snow.

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-09-29 07:11 AM

wow!! love the pic love it all

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2004-09-29 07:34 AM

Excellent!! "How gently..." - yes, indeed.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-09-29 08:52 AM

a gift written from the soul with an echo of eloquence

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-09-29 02:40 PM

LadySnow~
From the welcoming doormat title ... right down through the all of it ... poignant~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2004-09-29 02:46 PM

how gently comes
tomorrow, while it
bares teeth

EXCELLENT!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2004-09-29 04:17 PM

WOW! lovin this great imagery, intriguing write and photo

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

11 posted 2004-09-29 08:41 PM

Snow,
I walked in the words, through a few reads...I'm rewarded by your gift.

Robert Joseph

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

12 posted 2004-09-30 08:40 PM

Hi sweetie. Mmm! I have read this, and reread it, and I just wanted to say...

As you can see I am at a loss for words on this piece. There is a silent ache within my heart that wants to scream..."No...it can't end that way!"...and part of me says, "Yes! It makes perfect sense." I think in part it is the picture. There is such a sadness in it. At least that is what I feel when I look at it.

You do these too perfectly love. See what you do to me?

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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