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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-09-28 11:30 PM



Why did they put up with the charm?
simple people were likely kept in ignorance
removed from manners of lesser noblity
Patricians wouldn't invite them
Moliere would be heard by royal ears
and a straw maker would eek out existance
on a street named after his trade.


I wanted a definite answer to the pomp
the glory and the regal pose
portrait shots, gracious demeanors
part of a registered savoir-faire
went with matched hat and formal wear
from which spawned a casual look
but the spacious mansion still exists
rented out for annual reads
one presents poetry nights
later under a Circus Marcellus moon
and sensed a Roman public...
centuries after togas were shed.


Summer crowds, poetry pilgrims alike
stood for exhuberant palace expenses
straw makers are but a few in local towns
plaques of marble title cobbled lanes
the talk is polite, there's familiar gossip
as long as the wretched are kept from view
one must be pleasant with dinner guests
turn one way, not the other to talk
never know whose hand you'll shake
in the House of Barberini
marked by royal bee seals.




© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2004-09-29 11:21 PM


Martin,
Guess this bumb would have to stay out of sight. Funny we had to rescue each other's write! Peace friend...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-10-01 12:29 PM


Bum I wouldn't say...Thanks for the rescue ...


Larry C
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3 posted 2004-10-01 12:39 PM


But if you knew me...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Gaia
4 posted 2004-10-01 07:09 PM


an enjoyable peek into a different reality base
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