Open Poetry #33 |
Just A Little Bit Mended |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Just A Little Bit Mended Our paths parted almost a decade ago. My love for you deep, all encompassing, full surrender. In debt, recovering from the loss of an ill parent. You were my light in a storm. You came when I was filled with exhaustion and pain. Your love of music filled me with peaceful tranquility. You caressing, with long gentle fingers, an acoustic collage of melodic melodies of the guitar. The magic you did weave, as I sat and melted into the liquid message of your stroking minstrel melody. Moving ahead with my life- Taking the time to heal from another painful tribulation. Leaving you behind- Never to see your beautiful smile and sparkling laughing eyes. Never to hear your voice, your laughter or to hear your mesmerizing music. After all these years you have entered my heart once again. I hear your weeping guitar melodies and my heart aches for your loving touch of serenity. To see you smile and hear your laughter, just for a moment. Oh! How I do miss you kind sir. How I miss your humorous jokes filling me with laughter and your light-hearted happiness. After all these years, here are the tears once again, and that old familiar ache within my saddened heart. My heart broken, just a little bit mended. Love BonBon [This message has been edited by Bonnie j (09-28-2004 09:09 PM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Bonnie The magic in your heart means the magic in your eyes and your sense Flow Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I read your words again Bonnie I didn't say how good they were They are good Dave |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Thank you Dave for reading. Glad you enjoyed. See Ya Bonnie |
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klm Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 58New Orleans, Atlanta |
liquid words. kenneth The true poet writes to express, not impress. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBonnie~ How very tender is this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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