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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-09-27 03:05 PM




In drifting sway
‘cross the milky way
Your heart sparkles
gifting me the shine
Beyond the stars
clear way to mars
your smile touches mine
I swoon in tune with the moon
Captivating are the rays of you
Falling me in love
all over again~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-09-27 03:10 PM


oh Margie, how pretty, love the gold, one of my fav colors, next to blue....your on a roll today gal, keep on penning...Bravo!
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2 posted 2004-09-27 03:21 PM


and only words to reply with

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-09-27 05:56 PM


Marge,
A delight to read.

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4 posted 2004-09-27 10:02 PM


Dear Marge:

Very prettily said!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2004-09-27 10:04 PM


Oh so beautiful Marge!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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In the space between moments
6 posted 2004-09-27 10:18 PM


Oh Marge, you make me miss my sweetie...I loved the line "I swoon in tune with the moon" -- You have a unique way with words, my friend.  

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore


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7 posted 2004-09-28 12:54 PM


Nice Marge...James
Isobel
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8 posted 2004-09-28 06:23 AM


Dear Marge

Very nice indeed.

Love Isobel ox


Muys
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9 posted 2004-09-28 07:29 AM


For me Beautiful Memory's Marge.
Thank you
Huglets Muys

Betty
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10 posted 2004-09-28 08:39 AM


I certainly like this a lot Marge. Again thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Love,
Betty

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11 posted 2004-09-28 11:32 AM


Very beautiful, Marge! Enjoyed!

_,,,^.^,,,_
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12 posted 2004-09-28 11:33 AM


Love looks so good on you gal!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

NewEnglandlazurlu
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13 posted 2004-09-28 11:43 AM


Love is just great and you do it so well!

huggles, Marti

When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country.
                    -Elayne Boosler-

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-09-28 12:21 PM


You know, dear Marge, that this is just after my heart.
Soft, tender and universal.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

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15 posted 2004-09-28 12:25 PM


What a beautiful picture this paints! Very pretty, Marge.

           miscellanea

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16 posted 2004-09-29 06:59 AM


such beauty inside and out


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