Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
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2004-07-04
11:47 PM
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Fourth of Fireflies, Cracklin’
The evening started simple, the query was asked, how late can you stay? And it was said….
“Just 10 minutes or so,” and to the patio we had gone,
as we eased into conversational drift.
Our friends from the south came to claim some sweet time, come home to the north, as we offered manners of gift….
For we gift them time as they gift to us, the assured, and they, ever at ease,
so the
afternoon swiftly sang to soft evening, and I remarked,
“the fireflies are hanging a slight breeze.”
No finer a Fourth of July has been spent, with two friends who are curious, and sure; questions were asked, and tales were then told; and the evening did hang so pure.
Too soon, the ten minutes, some four hours later, they then picked up to leave, and did… but time, and gifts, are hung by a vine,
and later, grown grapes will release reveries.
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Karilea Rilling Jungel
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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
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2004-07-05
12:01 PM
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Beautiful poem my friend.Cold hands means a warm heart
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2004-07-05
12:11 PM
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Time does fly by when we are enjoying ourselves! It sounds like you had a very enjoyable 4th of July!
Enjoy that wine from your special time!
Linda
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iliana
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USA
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2004-07-05
01:24 AM
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Gorgeous, Lady Sunshine -- and fitting well for the end of a beautiful day! ....jo
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
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2004-07-05
01:33 AM
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Good friends Good food Good fun
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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-07-05
03:44 AM
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Beautifull
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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
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2004-07-05
09:01 AM
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sounds like a great time
its amazing how a good friend can make time fly like nothing else
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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
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2004-07-05
09:21 AM
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and later, grown grapes will release reveries.
Glad you had a great 4th! Enjoyed your poem, misc.
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passing shadows
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displaced
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2004-07-05
12:44 PM
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sounds better than my night...I had to work LOL
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