Open Poetry #33 |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
The dew wasn’t yet dry as the day forced itself upon me. Reluctantly, I accepted reality. I cannot change the past nor can I apparently control all of the future. And yet? Whatever I can control I must take into my hands and heart, mold the day into what I knead. The prospects are not always good, but I must take this clay of day... and make it my own. For it is what I have, and what I make of it shall be the essence of me. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Kacy- Your words are precise and very true. They ring softly and they buzz deep, then they enter the cortext of the heart and dig even deeper. In everything we say and do. Thank You! -Kellie |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You are welcome, Kellie, and thanks for letting me know these words touched you. Namaste. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Midnitesun, Wonderfully said! Whatever I can control I must take into my hands and heart, mold the day into what I knead. I think of bread baking as well as clay! Your words, the bread of life! miscellanea |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
or like a cousin used to say, although it sounds much more sinister, the way one make his bed is the way one sleeps in it...good write ![]() |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wise words - we are what we make of ourselves- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The words yes but the image of control no A fear of failing to lead to motivate leads people to believe dictate and control suit them People are then treated as essentially slaves to be bullied, killed if necessary but considered to be so unable to think that you should control them, for their own sakes I am over the top on this reaction, but you spurred me to say that control over yourself is one thing but never that you should then seek control over others Dave |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to each for reading and commenting. Dave? Yep, it's ALL about SELF-control, not controlling anyone else, or giving anyone else conrol and/or blame for events that unfold in one's life. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Amen, sistuh. Ooooo, I love how it "ends" (up). K |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
"I cannot change the past nor can I apparently control all of the future." ****************** So true but we can learn from the past and we can do our best to prepare for the future to an extent, but most important, our attitude and how we react or act upon events determine quite abit as you point out so evidently in your next verse. ****************** "Whatever I can control I must take into my hands and heart, mold the day into what I knead." ******************* Nicely stated and so true in it's entirety. I enjoyed much. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, JO, it usually does end 'up' doesn't it? Mark, what a kind reply. And I am honored that you've taken the time to read this. Thank you. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WHAT?!! I can't control everything? ![]() Well said, lady! ![]() All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, sorry lady Temptress. You ARE powerful, but not THAT powerful. Thanks for the visit. ![]() |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a favorite and recurring theme of mine, to do whatever is possible and not worry about the rest. However, you say it much better! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Good Morning, Ken ![]() ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
So very true ![]() and then He created the horse... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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