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Open Poetry #33

One Fell Swoop

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-09-26 10:01 PM

Thoughts of you dazzled me,
left me dazed and confused.

You led me through a garden,
full of hopes and dreams,

You proceeded to shatter all of me,
and my dreams in one fell swoop.

You let in enough sunlight to warm my heart,
and then you cast a shadow.

Leaving me alone in the dark,
with my lonely shattered heart.

You bid me come,
and fall in love.

But you didn't keep your part,
quickly my heart crumbled at the thought of not being near to you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-26 10:11 PM

Hope that landing left you with enough strength to fly away.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2004-09-26 10:15 PM

Kacy- I think I flew away before I fell. But there is always the possibility that I fly back into his arms, when the time is right.
-Kellie

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-27 12:41 PM

Nice words

Dave

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