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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2004-09-25 10:21 PM

To remember the time is nothing, not
that I could forget, but it is nothing to bring it back. Fall is here and a last ride to the mountains has me at the momment once again. I left, driving away to a future so unlike anything I could feel. I drove away and found myself in unfamiliar places. Mountains high enough to obscure my heart, wide enough that the wind was transformed there. Traveling in its embrace of beauty I cryed as the enfant does, for my heart once again burst and nothing could regain it. Now here I am, years later and new location, still clinging to those mountains, still wanting there embrace, only to find that it was you, your touch that has kept me alive all these years.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2004-09-25 10:34 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Michael.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-09-26 01:50 AM

Mmmmm, yes.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-26 10:42 AM

You say words but the meaning seems to cry, these arn't the words I meant.

Yes it is a good evocative write but you seem to be almost writing against yourself.

dave

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-09-26 10:49 AM

"Mountains high enough to obscure my heart, wide enough that the wind was transformed there."

~ These wonderfully expressive lines were especially moving for me.

EA

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2005-06-25 03:28 AM

That was simply beautiful MG
As Always
Jenn E

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-10-27 05:34 PM

more beautiful then anything

ARCTIC WIND

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