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Well 'rrrrr |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This was a composite with various people on politics. Dave Well Mr Prime Minister We’ve stifled all the talk All speak as one What is your next thought Well Mr Senator How is your new plant Congratulations on your election How much was that grant Well Mr Congressman I see a new face Took a long time Well it was a friendly race Well Mr Lawyer You are the Judge We Senators are here for guidance And the President here for fudge Well Dr Sir We abide your very word From a hot country Well bugger that I’ve heard Well Father Priest did the church reach its goal? Will money kill the Beast, will it save my immortal soul? Well Mr.Officer so we meet again. I have been wondering of late,are you foe or friend? Well then, mr. poet, you've made the words all ryme. At times this can be harder, and seems to take more time. But what is more important, is what is being said. At the risk of losing ballence, we lose the point instead. Contributors 1. Dave Page (davepage@dial.pipex.com) on Monday, November 23, 1998, 13:10:11. 2. brian long on Monday, November 23, 1998, 14:28:02. 3. Shadownation on Monday, November 23, 1998, 22:34:35. 4. Evad on Friday, December 04, 1998, 19:50:56. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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Powerful write. Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Eric but you have a more gentle way of making a point. Yours is probably the one that gets remembered. thanks Dave |
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