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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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cocoa surfer candy shark baitin' high on half round sides of an ocean fallin down barefoot on green glass sunday at the rincon the wino is an artist with his round rocks becoming people again but they don't talk until the tide gets high then they make grate sounds murmer music under water as they undress their ends and exchange their edges the yellow cab lady smokes her eyes red so she can haul the dui guys four pack to a load for appeal court appointments at the rudder room municipal lounge _________________ Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-12-2004 09:14 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, Your rivers tide just hides abide Where rocks and ripples make their chide. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your observations and metaphorical underlinings always make me view your world with an unjaded eye... and I thank you for that. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I love the way you absorb a scene and then select just the right words to paint your picture... ~K~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I know the rincon and that rudder room, lived near both years ago (and john's at the beach) seward/pierpont. This made me a bit homesick for pch, the channel islands, and the jetties. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You are a unique artist of poem!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya DS and Good morning, you are all of the above and a master at bringing the reader right to the core of an inter-gallactical float....incredible! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I find your images fascinating and truly outside the box for me. Thanks for the chance to see things from a different eye.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sir Sy, arrigoto my friend, always a treat to see your comments _____________ Ms Sunshine, you are too kind with your reviews, I owe you handfulls of appreciation ______________ Ms Kahlil, damply sweltered into watercolor just for your reading leasure, thanks to you ms ___________ MS Midnite...it is still the highway with soft pillows for white lines and dark lounge chairs for curves...welcome to many returns here...and thank you for your reads ___________ Ms Martie, hugs to my neighbor lady, and thank you for peeking over the fence.. _________ Ms LeeJ, you bless me with your eyes and offer soft woman touchs in your replies..thanks to you much ___________ Ms Susan, thanks ms, yes there are no boxes in my pencil ends..they are even filled with loose cannon ink I am afraid....thanks for putting up with my images |
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