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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-07-12 07:48 AM

Blue, Blue, my eyes are blue,
Spilling out and washing out you;
Blue, Blue, my soul is blue,
Losing all hope when I lose you.

Black, Black, the night is black,
Lightless and lifeless till you are back;
Green, Green the grass is green,
Morning has broke with dewy sheen.

Day, Day, it’s another day,
How many more I just can’t say.
Night, Night, I long for the night;
So I can dream and you I sight.

Red, Red, her blood was red,
Never return with so much shed.
White, White her stone is white;
Now nothing will ever be right.

Gloom

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-07-12 08:20 AM

Professor,
Now that is gloom. Very catchy read. Enjoyed

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-07-12 10:05 AM

Ah, now that is not good of you, Sir...
to get an old tune going in my head
this busy Monday morning....

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-12 10:29 AM

oh, so sad.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-07-12 10:39 AM

sending hugs and big smiles...for a sunny day filled with love

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-07-12 10:39 AM

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-07-12 10:41 AM

A gloomy good use of color imagery to convey the scene and the emotions.

Kellsue
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 210
Waukesha, WI USA

7 posted 2004-07-12 11:57 AM

So sad, but so wonderfully written!

Kelly

You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving
There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-07-12 12:30 PM

dang

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

9 posted 2004-07-12 01:16 PM

Thank you, Seymour,
Pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Sunshine,
Sorry, I had not realized you were that old,
Stirring up childhood memories. But, glad you liked the stir.

Thank you, Susan,
I was going to give this to a local group,
But they broke up, add another sad part to the song.

Thank you, LeeJ,
For the wishes, but today is dreary here

Thank you, Susan C.
You can cry on my shoulder if you like
It won’t hurt the leather.

Thank you, Midnitesun,
You are very kind in your praise

Thank you, Kellsue,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, passing shadows
Always nice to see your response to my words

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2004-07-12 02:31 PM

so very poignant Profess. Nicely written.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-07-12 02:59 PM

Gloomy guy, this brought back a tune to me, too. Sad, sad.......but good write........jo

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

12 posted 2004-07-14 04:26 PM

Now I'm humming "black is black I want my baby back..if grey is grey..." definately a song before my time but your poem brought that to mind and some other feelings..*sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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