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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-09-24 08:00 AM

The rain poured
an eternal stream
last night;

can't you see the trees' distortion,
their customary composure
thrown off kilter,

and these tiresome tears
neverending,

now warping the euphoric haze,
that once padded this heart's lacerations,

and you leave now
turning your face
to where the moon
never reveals herself,

the storm played its overture
despite you,

i stand guard in the center,
holding onto myself
in the downpour,

as you continue to feign
your obscurity,

without explanation,
you slipped through
in the undertow, as the
rain plays like a mime
that defines my condition,

the moon will refurbish herself
and perhaps her tides
will give way
to the truth of your elusiveness,

though i thrive on the catharsis
as this storm becomes my surrogate,

i take refuge
in the mist that lingers,
whispering in the light
of my endless desire for you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-24 08:04 AM

outstanding write lady, this gave me chills
a stirring read....

Hugs and smiles sent along
Happy Friday and thank you for sharing

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-09-24 08:04 AM

"i take refuge
in the mist that lingers,
whispering in the light
of my endless desire for you."

~ I see. I hear. I feel...

EA

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-09-24 08:06 AM

inkedgoddess,
Sad but beautiful write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-09-24 08:14 AM

i stand guard in the center,
holding onto myself
in the downpour,

Dear Michelle, your endless desire is masterfully rendered .... holding to yourself diminishes the vulnerability.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

5 posted 2004-09-24 07:15 PM

Stirring imagery - reaping a harvest of thought. Greatly enjoyed!

Robert Joseph

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-09-24 08:10 PM

Captivating and bold, your language here is superb Michelle.
Excellent...you are such an amazing woman.
TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-09-24 08:14 PM

thanks for stopping by

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-09-24 08:36 PM

I feel this

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

9 posted 2004-09-30 01:46 PM

I feel it too. Nice job!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-09-30 05:53 PM

Love this one Michele!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-09-30 06:46 PM

Strong and poignant.....~P

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-09-30 08:02 PM

Wow - I can feel the streams of water across flesh coursing emotion.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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