meltdown - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-09-24 01:36 AM

low angled sunlight becomes you
as soft shadows caress shoulders

   I want to lean on

times like this
heighten the imagined scent of you

akin to a lingering aftertaste

   bittersweet chocolate

‘though I don’t favor chocolate

I favored you...

the tingle of tongue that remains
   in mere melted musing memory

savored slowly

while in midnight dreams
    we did

‘neath
    low angled sunlight

melt down

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-09-24 02:05 AM

And I just thought you had something stuck on the roof of your mouth!

Oh all right, I liked it. It was all sappy and stuff. Good thing I'm a romantic!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-09-24 02:09 AM

ROTFL. You are way too funny.
See, I can write romance sometimes.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2004-09-24 02:22 AM

smiling, yes indeed she can.

you left me licking the spoon

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-09-24 06:20 AM

This is a very beautiful write, dear Kacy.
I love your romantic side!
Love, Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-09-24 06:26 AM

chuckling and the woman in me says
Its nice to see romance in the making...Good one, enjoyed!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2004-09-24 11:41 AM

the tingle of tongue that remains
in mere melted musing memory

stylish sentiment!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-09-24 12:01 PM

Kacy, and this hopeless romantic
loves your romantic writes.
Very good.
Hugs,
Ethel

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2004-09-24 12:45 PM

I ain't much into that romance type thing, but I am sure into this meltdown. Beautifully expressed and nice to read on like this from you.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-09-24 02:47 PM

Ooooh, like this one a lot - melt down, yes indeedy.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2004-09-25 01:18 AM

*sigh* you are all so sweet! I'm delighted you enjoyed a meltdown moment with me.

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

11 posted 2004-09-25 08:38 AM

I enjoyed seeing this side of you. It is always a treasure in our lives when we find a meltdown! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-09-25 08:41 AM

makes me want fondue or something else

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2004-09-25 10:57 AM

Ken, someone suggested I meltdown more often. LOL.
Dixie, LOL, enjoy the fondue whenever you can, but please stay outta jealous Jeanne's way.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.