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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-22 08:49 AM



...In A Manner of Speaking

There, the light of my heart
pricked by the points of each day.
Just a fleck to some or one,
but to me each point a reflection
of what is/is not  to come.

Place a finger there,
where my heart lights, its beat
would increase with just a touch from you
hidden emotions to rise
my eyes to yours to view.

No spell to speak, just body weak
with feelings, feelings pinning me down.
An audience of one, just you no other, none
here, here where the light of heart speaks beat.... instead of sound.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-22 08:56 AM


you have a delicate charm to your manner of speaking...a grace that goes directly to a spirtual touch...may the grace of life smile rays of warmth on you today...thank you for this lovely write....

Good good Morning

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-09-22 09:10 AM


Good Morning Lee,
here in South Central PA where the sun is shining and the Autumn temps will be in the upper 80's today...

a day to enjoy the warmth

~smiling thanks
M

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-09-22 10:20 AM


MzWynterGal~
You grace these pages always with such delicate thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
4 posted 2004-09-22 10:52 AM


Place a finger there,
where my heart lights, its beat
would increase with just a touch from you
hidden emotions to rise
my eyes to yours to view.

Nicely said M

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

5 posted 2004-09-22 11:03 AM


romantic!  just the way I like 'em!

Rf

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