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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2004-09-21 08:37 PM




I Am

I am a star shining within your eyes
A comet traveling  across the sky
A moonbeam shining bright
A shadow hidden in the night.

I am the tears in the gentle rain
The wind in the mountain terrain
The ice in the winter storm
The cry in the new babe born.

I am as cuddly as a stuffed toy  
As loveable as a little boy  
As old as a moment in time
As young as a girl in her prime.

I am a dreamer of dreams
A storyteller who likes to weave
A poet who likes to visualize
I am  who I am
I am me.

Bonnie J.

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-09-21 08:40 PM


I may not be the Dave but your words are terrific

Dave

Bonnie j
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2 posted 2004-09-21 08:47 PM


Yepper Dave Page this one is for you.
Bon

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-09-21 09:18 PM


You are

Blazing across a caress
Dancing a moonbeam on a starless night
To touch a Sunswept wind blinding communications
In watered days we wondered searching for sand that rendered moisture
In those days of wind, ice and cries of new born children

Now we have the pro-pack for the choice

We dreamed of essence of emotion holding each other in essence

We dreamed of dreams and spun our desires
Now we dream of dreams of dreams
To desire
Our vision
Of desire
Of vision

dave

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4 posted 2004-09-22 07:01 PM


I never made the right words, I just wrote words.

The words to you poem are:

You are

Dave

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