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Open Poetry #33

Haiku (thanks Midnitesun)

Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-09-21 05:24 PM

Sun angle tips low
colors take on richer hues
Leaves fall for winter

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-21 05:37 PM

What a beauty! guess we are co-inspirators?

Krawdad
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2 posted 2004-09-21 06:08 PM

Ya, I love that, "co-inspirators".
Suppose we could get arrested for it?
Never know these days . . .

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VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

3 posted 2004-09-21 07:06 PM

hehehe "fall for winter"

love the idea, like falling in love? perchance

love the vivid image and the wonderful twist at the end...that is, if I was truly sharp enough that I got it right

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2004-09-21 07:09 PM

LOL, these days it doesn't take much to get into trouble. Then again....it didn't take too much thirty+ years ago either. LOL.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-09-21 10:25 PM

Excellent one...much enjoyed the images.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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