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"Trapt are the fallen"
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"Trapt are the fallen" |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Trapt are the Fallen Running from all of they're fears, falling in to temptation, Crawling crippled on their knees. Wearing makeup that hides years, Fealing inner mutaTION, Crying under appletrees. Relying on the wrong peers, Leaving all expectation, Blaming stings on bumble bees. fighting all their falling tears, waiting at the train station, Denying all that SHOULD be. Looking all the way back to who they use to be: Finding all out that now, they can never be free. --------------------------------------------------- Ok so I over did the alls and the ings, but I think its worked out to were it works with the poem. lots of love Juju |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I think it works. I wonder, though, who the fallen are in your mind? Mine can bring up so many possibilities. Very interesting, this. Let's hope that redemption is available to all.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I supose I should of been less braod, yet I wasn't at the same time. I hinteds who I was talking about. Mostly poeple of crime. It always seems they are trapt in to that life. Not wanting to conform, yet regret what they could of been. Sometimes I wonder if purgitory is just what could you have done to better the world you live in or be in the place of all of the people you have hurt. I could go on and on I supose... Juju |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You have some really good things going on here, Juju. Enjoyed! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you. |
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