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Open Poetry #33

The Flustered Butterfly

klm
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta

0 posted 2004-09-20 11:41 PM

The flustered butterfly fluttered here 'n there
For he could not taste the daisy's dew,
"Just what with me can be the matter?"
He asked the busy, buzzing bee.

The busy bumble's honeyed hummings blew,
"What's wrong with thee is not the matter,
The daisy's dewy taste is just for me!"

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-09-20 11:54 PM

I'm seeing a pattern here...wait...

very cute write...

bit dizzy, but that's to be expected.

TD

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2004-09-20 11:55 PM

no wonder there's such inequality in the world!...this could be extended as a kind of children's tale..welcome here and write on

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-21 01:39 PM

Like it, it's nice.

Dave

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-21 01:42 PM

I love this!
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