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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-20 06:09 PM

When you think of what you do
understanding what is you
But you were never you
Until you thought you were you
Then you faced a challenge
Of why you are someone looking at you
Knowing you are you
Not understanding you
Because you dont want to be you
And face being you

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-09-20 06:18 PM

The big question! Who am I?
To succeed in being "ourselves" is quite a deed.
Cute write.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-20 06:26 PM

Margherita

Write something.

I enjoy your writing.

love Dave

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-09-21 03:36 AM

Thank you Dave for your kind invitation ... and for your reply on my latest.

You are You.
Reminding myself!
Love, Margherita

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-09-21 09:35 AM

Like Popeye the Sailor, 'I yam what I yam, and that's all that I yam'.

Enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-09-21 10:17 AM

I can be myself, and I like that, it's everyone else who thinks I am someone else...or wanted me to be? Now, it's a walk through springtime all the time...and I don't mind the cold of winter anymore...

Thought provoking write

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-09-21 10:53 AM

Oooh I love to read a piece that leaves me deep in thought!
And this one did just that!
Very much enjoyed the read Dave!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2004-09-21 11:28 AM

Pilgrimage

I've just put the spinach in the stew.

Thanks Nan

Dave

LeeJ

Nice thought Lee to be in springtime all the time.

I dont mind winter myself - it is fresh and as I indicated to Nan, I love a good stew to warm up on indoors.

Enchantress

Thanks for the "deep in thought". I write stuff and I never really know, how it is going to go down.

Maybe if it snows, I'll eat my spinach and blow the summer back.

Dave

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2004-09-21 08:07 PM

does make u think
and make u miss the u you was
before u became the u he created being confused with the u you become while trying to get back to the real you
good write

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

9 posted 2004-09-21 08:35 PM

I think I will post a poem I wrote called
I AM. Just for you.
BonBon

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

10 posted 2004-09-21 08:44 PM

Thanks

I didn't expect the attention for what was an attempt at something.

Thanks all

Dave

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

11 posted 2004-09-21 08:52 PM

Bonnie

I have caught up with my brain or something much smaller and read your poem.

I'd love to write poetry with you.

You can get me on davepage@dial.pipex.com.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-09-21 10:03 PM

I am me? Oh shoot, better go back to the psychotherapist, I thought I had that personality thing all straightened out

No, I enjoyed this play on a concept - it's fun. Almost like a tongue twister.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2004-09-21 10:40 PM

Self-acceptance...
an individual's most difficult accomplishment...
but once achieved?
The most comforting...

Well done, Sir!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

14 posted 2004-09-21 11:03 PM

Oh, yes! I do understand! ~ "You are You" and I am I ! lol

EA

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2004-09-21 11:08 PM

I understand this and it reminds me of an old saying, you are you and I am I and if by chance we find each other, its beautiful....
yeah, that made sense...lol...
seriously..I enjoyed the views into the different you's that we become. Well done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-22-2004 08:15 AM).]

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

16 posted 2004-09-22 01:54 PM

Susan

Something in your words reminded me of part of a song:

Susan the plans they made put an end to me
So I woke up this morning and I wrote down this song, just cant remember who to send it to.

Oh I've seen fire and rain
Summer days I thought would never end - words from James Taylor.

Thanks

Dave

Sunshine

I would have had a word with myself this morning, but I was out at the time.

Thanks Sunshine

dave

Earth Angel

Still there is always Me but I always think if me, I think.

Dave

Gentle Spirit

Thank you for some lovely words.

Dave

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