Open Poetry #33 |
You are You |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
When you think of what you do understanding what is you But you were never you Until you thought you were you Then you faced a challenge Of why you are someone looking at you Knowing you are you Not understanding you Because you dont want to be you And face being you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The big question! Who am I? To succeed in being "ourselves" is quite a deed. Cute write. Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Margherita Write something. I enjoy your writing. love Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you Dave for your kind invitation ... and for your reply on my latest. You are You. Reminding myself! Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Like Popeye the Sailor, 'I yam what I yam, and that's all that I yam'. Enjoyed this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I can be myself, and I like that, it's everyone else who thinks I am someone else...or wanted me to be? Now, it's a walk through springtime all the time...and I don't mind the cold of winter anymore... Thought provoking write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I love to read a piece that leaves me deep in thought! And this one did just that! Very much enjoyed the read Dave! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Pilgrimage I've just put the spinach in the stew. Thanks Nan Dave LeeJ Nice thought Lee to be in springtime all the time. I dont mind winter myself - it is fresh and as I indicated to Nan, I love a good stew to warm up on indoors. Enchantress Thanks for the "deep in thought". I write stuff and I never really know, how it is going to go down. Maybe if it snows, I'll eat my spinach and blow the summer back. Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
does make u think and make u miss the u you was before u became the u he created being confused with the u you become while trying to get back to the real you good write |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I think I will post a poem I wrote called I AM. Just for you. BonBon |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks I didn't expect the attention for what was an attempt at something. Thanks all Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Bonnie I have caught up with my brain or something much smaller and read your poem. I'd love to write poetry with you. You can get me on [email protected]. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I am me? Oh shoot, better go back to the psychotherapist, I thought I had that personality thing all straightened out No, I enjoyed this play on a concept - it's fun. Almost like a tongue twister. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Self-acceptance... an individual's most difficult accomplishment... but once achieved? The most comforting... Well done, Sir! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! I do understand! ~ "You are You" and I am I ! lol EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I understand this and it reminds me of an old saying, you are you and I am I and if by chance we find each other, its beautiful.... yeah, that made sense...lol... seriously..I enjoyed the views into the different you's that we become. Well done. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-22-2004 08:15 AM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan Something in your words reminded me of part of a song: Susan the plans they made put an end to me So I woke up this morning and I wrote down this song, just cant remember who to send it to. Oh I've seen fire and rain Summer days I thought would never end - words from James Taylor. Thanks Dave Sunshine I would have had a word with myself this morning, but I was out at the time. Thanks Sunshine dave Earth Angel Still there is always Me but I always think if me, I think. Dave Gentle Spirit Thank you for some lovely words. Dave |
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