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Open Poetry #33

Smiling Recollection

Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

0 posted 2004-07-11 05:19 PM

I remember you and smile.

Thinking about all of the times we had,
Moments we shared; good or bad.

Wandering through every park I can find,
Thoughts keep resonating in my mind;
Sometimes alone, but always together,
It was you, and me, forever.

Staring past.
Walking fast.
Still loving you.

Kellsue
Member

since 2000-05-06

Posts 210
Waukesha, WI USA

1 posted 2004-07-11 05:48 PM

A longing for lost love. Nice write!

Kelly

You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving
There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-11 06:38 PM

This too could be missing a long gone friend. I feel that sometimes, walking through familiar places ripe with history, but the link holding the place and myself together is missing.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-07-11 08:49 PM

Enjoyed the precious thoughts here.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-11 08:52 PM

Such an ache to this beautiful write....lovely.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-07-11 09:49 PM

Yes, this aches...thought I feel it holds
promise as well...

Paper Tiger
Member

since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

6 posted 2004-07-12 01:22 AM

"I remember you and smile."

I wish I could smile when I think of that person.

We see much, observe little, and perceive less.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-07-12 04:21 AM

yeah....*sigh*

Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

8 posted 2004-07-12 09:59 AM

thank you.

I don't really know why I wrote this. :S

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