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Open Poetry #33

The Sunset (a tanka)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2004-09-19 10:28 PM

The Sunset
~ By Sue ~

Watching the sunset
With loving arms around me
Simply warms my heart
As you hold me close to you
I can feel your heartbeat, too

9-19-04

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2004-09-20 02:54 AM

Enjoyed

I love these more "uncommon" poetic forms.

and then He created the horse...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-09-20 09:17 AM

A moment in time...

May this lovely write truly be a reflection of your reality, Sweet Sue!

Warm-hearted hugs!
Linda

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-09-20 09:22 AM

OhSweetSuzieQ~
This is simply LOVELY ... and in PERFECT form~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-20 09:38 AM

Lovely lovely Sue!!!
Well done and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

5 posted 2004-09-20 10:41 AM

I can just feel the warmth of the sunset glowing in my heart... This is beautiful...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-09-20 11:13 AM

nice

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2004-09-21 03:57 AM

Sue,
A nice way to "let the sun go down".

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-09-21 09:35 AM

certainly nice to be a part of, thank you for the warmth of your words and the view of your sunsets....smiles and hugs

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