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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-11 03:50 PM

A Star Fell On Me

I know the night
he and I have become constant friends
counted stars with lack of nothing left to do
and maybe I have hung a wish on each of them
most that would or could never come true
but the night is still made for dreams
I have tried magic and no spell helped
and prayers went by silently unanswered
hope was something I only had to hold on to
tear salted it hung in darkness as a gift unshared
I sat alone wondering if the world would dig deep
and open up just a little to give me a chance
a heart too sensitive for this world –scarred
(and is that something I should apologize for)
for underneath the cuts is clearly strength
maybe I am selfish I just wanted something
for me
I finally gave up on hope went on with the night
then something incredible happened

a star fell on me

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-07-11 03:52 PM

Too cool. May your star always shine brightly --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-07-11 03:56 PM

Helen

Wonderful!!!! Love the photo!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-07-11 06:13 PM

OneSlick~

Lady ... you SHINE

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-07-11 07:20 PM

I like the poem.
(:

Juju

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-12 04:25 AM

way too cool!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-07-12 01:11 PM

CAUSE I CAN !!!

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-07-13 01:32 PM

Excellent!

JL

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2004-07-13 03:50 PM

Beautiful words!

Eric

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2004-07-13 08:51 PM

"a star fell on me"

wrong

you reached up and grabbed it

Love the badge! Wear it proudly! You deserve every reflection it returns!

e

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-07-13 09:11 PM

This is so good, Helen! So good!

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2004-07-13 09:57 PM

It looks good on you..congratulations!!

believe in what your heart feels...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-07-14 01:17 PM

I loved the poem even before I saw the photo... now I can only applaud. *S*

Congratulations!!!!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-07-14 01:23 PM

to have such a dream come true after such hard work becomes so extemely valuable...congrats and hugs sent your way, for many full days ahead...best wishes and be careful

hope this won't interfer with your writing, I would miss your words

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