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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-09-19 11:45 AM


from a report on Huntington, Quebec


No authority in the dead of night
what roam streets out of parental sight
their children are not tucked in bed
in front of community hall instead

The mayor didn't say what they're up to
to get them home he's applied a curfew
out of touch with liberal thoughts some say
he'd rather stick to his guns this way

Child are inheritors of adult life
what we do passes onto them
all is transitory
yet we see one horse towns
not a single police car
to enforce a logical rule
child's on a tandem or at school.
Now the parent may neglect his fry
stark truths haunt under moon lit sky
not only are kids away from their books
their also acquire the talent of crooks
invade resident homes as nightly visitors
uninvited, found relaxed in comfy armchairs
town homes invaded, the mayor sets you square

all is transitory
seems calm in town lots next day
last night kids got into a midnight fray...
the word authority isn't popular with human rights
what when kids roam streets late into nights...




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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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1 posted 2004-09-19 11:50 AM


It may seem old fashioned, but children truly do need limits, rules, and discipline. I am not talking about martial rule, but parents who care, are involved and lovingly guide their children.  And the children, though they may verbally protest, in truth, it is found they want thier parents involved in the guidance of their life.  I have seen the difference first hand within my own sphere of being - you bring up a very valid concern.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-09-19 11:59 AM


That is true Susan children in their own way of asking want aome kind of authority and its up to adults to provide that and not martial law and the rule of the strap. Quebec has the highest suicide rate in the world and there is a link in the fraility of family structure here and those premature deaths.
By family structure not only am I refering to the application of the rule of food clothing and shelter but giving guidance to the child and setting certain rules.


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