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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-09-18 10:49 AM



Drowning from the deluge of
too-much rain from weeping skies,
I looked down at the swollen ground all around
and suddenly did realize
the shrinking aquifers were being refreshed, replenished
enough to carry us through many more years with  life
with one of the few things life on earth requires.

Water.

Water, water, everywhere.

More than enough for millions to drink.


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
kayjay
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1 posted 2004-09-18 10:56 AM


It is always good to hear your take on things happening around us.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2004-09-18 11:04 AM


Thanks Ken Good morning.
This is how I ultimately resolve my frustration with nature as well as humans.
Guess you could say I  'flip-flop'??? LOL

Susan
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3 posted 2004-09-18 01:02 PM


Thanks - I needed that reminder for the rain has been too pervasive here too - though not a deluge as those experience from the storms.  Still, the "fire" danger is now low, and that's a good thing around here.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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4 posted 2004-09-18 02:03 PM


Great write!

Eric

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5 posted 2004-09-18 02:25 PM


Well, hey, Kacy, you are most welcome.
You can even steal a line if it helps.

Midnitesun
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6 posted 2004-09-18 08:39 PM


Susan, glad you could get something positive from this.
Eric THANKS!
Kraw, thanks mucho, if I steal/borrow a line, I always try to remember to give credit. In this case, your AM write kicked my muse into gear.

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