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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2004-09-18 01:42 AM

Love Sonnet #24

The singing of birds at first glimpse of dawn's blue light
but I only hear your voice
the Sunday sun smiling down so warm and bright
but I only feel your warmth
the autumn scent on the sweet morning wind
but I only smell your hair
the last summer blooms painting rainbows in the garden
but I only see your eyes
the taste of ripe strawberries and sweet cream
but I only taste your lips
the escape of a midsummer night's dream
but I only need my dream come true
I only need my one true love
I only need you

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-09-18 02:51 AM

This was an incredibly beautiful and loving poem. I actually found myself sighing!

To love ~ and more love!
EA

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-09-18 03:13 AM

A beautifully written poem. Heartfelt, sincere. A lucky person to be the recipient of such a gift. I enjoyed sharing in some of that magic.

Kevin

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-19 12:56 PM

Ah, the overwhelming sense of being in love-

Susan

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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2004-09-19 02:29 AM

Very nice poem soul drifter. However I suggest changing the title to Love Poem # 24 since this is not really written as a sonnet. I think a title change would be a little less misleading. (This is just a personal suggestion though. As the artist you have the right to call it anything you want.) I love the poem though...so please don't be hurt by my suggestion. This is really pretty.

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ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

5 posted 2004-09-19 02:55 AM

That was a sweet poem. I could the love you felt. Nothing existing but the true love before you. Awesome write.

- Haze

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2004-09-19 05:43 AM

oh my!! you have taken my breath away! well written and very much enjoyed

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2004-09-19 11:03 PM

Very lovely, beautiful read as well.

:-)

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