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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where Upon Like flowers in the green of field We give the essence of our yield And weave upon our due of death We leave our seed and new of breath Some how I feel there is within More recognition than our skin Some how we pass a gene of wealth Beyond the aging of our health It came to me on wings of wroth That grew on me in mental growth And took me to a peace of lie That shed the anger of the why It is an entity when done An entity of one on one A singular plurality That puts to bed morality In each of us there is a need This is the gift within the seed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Like flowers in the green of field" YOU give to us POETIC yield "Some how I feel there is within" More recognition than YOUR skin "Some how we pass a gene of wealth Beyond the aging of our health" ~ so profound "And took YOU to a peace of lie That shed the anger of the why" ~ and may that always be true for you! Love and Inner Peace, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good good morning Sy This was a cornucopia of beautiful sounds... Lovely, Happy Friday |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Wonderful wonderful write this crisp morn. Hope you and yours have a wonderful weekend. ~Morning hugs & tea Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am always learning something new when I get a chance to sip your brew... "wroth" WOW!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy that seed we leave grows in the hearts of those that we have touched. Thank you for this thoughtful write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"In each of us there is a need This is the gift within the seed" Your poetry is a gift, sweet Sy!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Always a little in a hurry, I picked this one out of yours and ...... as always, the pleasure in reading your words, is intense. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Seymour...loved this piece. It is always a pleasure to read your verses. Bravo my friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The entire poem is fantastic... but your closing couplet is just perfect! *S* Excellent work! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, A question... ======================= That puts to bed morality ======================= Should that read mortality? And as usual a wonderful write dear friend. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How could I have missed this one Sy? A beauty rescuing a damsel in distress, reassuring of the virtue of the smallest blessings, making them hugh miracles, being one with all and all with one.... Lovely |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends above. Needless to say you make my day. My time is rationed lately and as soon as it relaxes I'll be back to each one of you. Thank you for your kindness. |
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