Chromatic illuminations of the Congenial Rapture

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Open Poetry #33

Chromatic illuminations of the Congenial Rapture

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-09-16 05:24 PM

What a waste of time to be blind!
Crime is a hassle we have to battle
Come around and hear the sweet sound
Of the Mile High tide and blues
We come and we go but we never stay
In that place vicariously far above
Of the gates that lead you into temptation
Fear coming from my eternal heart
Of blasphemy we live along, and long
But the one who cries of the lasting pain
Can stay but never ever remain
The way of the night is coming near
And brewing in pleasure is fear
However soft it is, stop and listen
Because the rocks of love will glisten
In the sunny bright light
Stop::::::::::::::and see its height
Along and be strong for ever more
We do not have a lasting tendency
To break off love and mediocrity

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-09-16 10:09 PM

Everyone thinks that love is with a person or an ideal but it often is both or neither

Dave

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2004-09-18 10:55 AM

Interesting write here, your 1st, line set the stage very nicely for the entire write... and we can dream can't we. Nice job here.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-09-18 11:01 AM

very very nice
enjoyed the rocks of light, understanding those tunes of the night

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