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Open Poetry #33

With Scissor

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-09-16 02:48 PM

The scissor cut the paper releasing the stone,
Fallen stone dropped paper and scissors alone
Resting in her small and tender hand.
The stone rolls away
Paper blows away
And with her scissor quietly stand.

The paper boy brings more news
Stories of places with black and white views
That cut out to make collages of today
She gathers up stones from off the ground
Wrapping the pictures and hold the down
Least the wind carries them away

The morning comes sneaking
With scissor she stands peaking
Resting in her small and tender hand.
Cuts the stone agin
Paper fly with the wind.
And with her scissor quietly stand.

Gloom
Thanks be to miscellanea for the inspiration

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-09-16 03:05 PM

whoaoaoao!  Am I flattered? Thanks, Professor.  It's nice to know that my words have inspired yours.
          miscellanea

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-09-16 03:12 PM

Excellent inspired write!
Much enjoyed Gloom.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-09-16 03:32 PM

Professor,
Enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-09-16 03:39 PM

You've managed to mix childhood, a touch of oriental, a bit of bliss, and a poet's inspiration into a fine weave, Professor. I am smiling...brightly!

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2004-09-16 05:27 PM

Thank you, miscellanea,
For the inspiration and the kind words
Pleased you enjoyed my words like I did yours.

Thank you, Enchantress,
Glad you liked

Thank you, Seymour
Always nice to see your approval by response

Thank you, Sunshine,
You are kind in your praise,
Somehow I feel that you are always smiling
But if my words might make it slightly wider
I am pleased.

Gloom

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