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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-16 10:27 AM


Hope no-one minds the light humour

Dave

The first rule I was ever taught was allow someone to hold you.  

The second rule was to remember to hold your wallet before rule 1 since I was never that good looking.

In the Earl’s Court the Chancellor sat as usual just below the Earl’s right hand although he was getting a bit uneasy about this, in terms of what he felt his position should be.

The Chief touched his head to the floor and remained on one knee in salute.

If he hadn’t ended up with a leg in the air it would have been perfect.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-09-16 05:18 PM


Excuse me for chuckling...for I see
the humor, indeed!

mrmojorisin5908
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2 posted 2004-09-16 05:27 PM


It's.....um....strangely and remotley comical and indeed full of integral intellegence. A nice metaphoric and humorous piece!

YEAH

Andrew A.
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E S West
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3 posted 2004-09-16 05:29 PM


very funny indeed, we may think alike..

             E S West

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" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-09-16 10:18 PM


Thanks and I am sorry if it was too near. I watch too much of the Carry On films.

Dave

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