Open Poetry #33 |
Spirit of The Owl - with a nod to Hoot... |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spirit of The Owl Winter's glen gray dawn skies no sun up in early morn heaven sighs down the lane tree lined but bare mysteries unfold you didn't know were there snow and ice crunch underfoot walking quiet is impossible trip on root hidden in the deepest recesses of here and then sleeps the spirit of the Owl, answering 'who' at when a discord settles within to break his sleep and from the recesses of his darkness deep the spirit comes, and the Owl then keeps the secret of all time, held in feathered wing and in the most silenced of plume, sweeps off no effort in movement, feathers outstretched through naked limbs, through the breech no sound, no blare, in feathered wing silence overall, no hint of gray ghost on high was it just a vision, or a spirit in the sky silently it sat, as quietly was swept away spirits come to the land in the early morn while the eve still sleeps, before day is born snow and ice crunch underfoot walking quiet is impossible trip on root down the lane tree lined but bare mysteries unfold you didn't know were there winter's glen gray dawn skies no sun up in early morn heaven sighs ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 11 September 2000 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, I love this write! keeping it safe in my library |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic Karilea... A keeper for my library!!! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
fabulous read and write, a joyful array of spiritual blessings interrited here, thank you for the early morning wake up colorful call, tremendous! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love it when a beauty of yours resurfaces! Love & Light, Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
really liked it a lot |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I'm reminded of "I Heard the Owl Call my Name" by Margaret Craven. It tells the story of a humble Anglican priest who is dying of cancer. He lives among an indian tribe of the Pacific Northwest. Well done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I love it...I love it...This poem took my breath away...such a joy to read... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Quality pure quality Dave |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I agree with everyone here. Quality! You know, I think I know the Owl, or at least someone like it. Your portrayal is superb. A pure pleasure to read! miscellanea |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Wrapped in wholesome melody throughout, Sunshine. One for the daydreamers, me included. Very nice...and thanks for your very nice comments re: my last post here. The Best, wayne If nothing is something |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
I love this poem lady sunshine, it moves and moves me. A true pleasure to read. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Karelia, ...As only you could portray the beauty of these elusive creatures. You and I are both truly learning what can be hidden where least expected, sometimes the best surprises are those we never expected. Thank you for this and for being the ear that hears this owl's voice. Hugs |
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