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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-09-15 09:37 PM



Spirit of The Owl


Winter's glen
gray dawn skies
no sun up in
early morn
heaven sighs

down the lane
tree lined but bare
mysteries unfold
you didn't know
were there

snow and ice
crunch underfoot
walking quiet is
impossible
trip on root

hidden in the deepest recesses of here and then
sleeps the spirit of the Owl, answering 'who' at when
a discord settles within to break his sleep
and from the recesses of his darkness deep
the spirit comes, and the Owl then keeps

the secret of all time, held in feathered wing
and in the most silenced of plume, sweeps off
no effort in movement, feathers outstretched
through naked limbs, through the breech
no sound, no blare, in feathered wing

silence overall, no hint of gray ghost on high
was it just a vision, or a spirit in the sky
silently it sat, as quietly was swept away
spirits come to the land in the early morn
while the eve still sleeps, before day is born

snow and ice
crunch underfoot
walking quiet is
impossible
trip on root

down the lane
tree lined but bare
mysteries unfold
you didn't know
were there

winter's glen
gray dawn skies
no sun up in
early morn
heaven sighs


~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
11 September 2000



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-15 09:44 PM


oh, I love this write!
keeping it safe in my library

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-09-15 09:51 PM


Fantastic Karilea...
A keeper for my library!!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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3 posted 2004-09-16 08:48 AM


fabulous read and write, a joyful array of spiritual blessings interrited here, thank you for the early morning wake up colorful call, tremendous!  


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4 posted 2004-09-16 08:52 AM


I love it when a beauty of yours resurfaces!

Love & Light,
Linda

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5 posted 2004-09-16 10:19 AM


really liked it a lot
kayjay
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6 posted 2004-09-16 11:22 AM


I'm reminded of "I Heard the Owl Call my Name" by Margaret Craven.  It tells the story of a humble Anglican priest who is dying of cancer.  He lives among an indian tribe of the Pacific Northwest.  Well done!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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7 posted 2004-09-16 11:55 AM


I love it...I love it...This poem took my breath away...such a joy to read...

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8 posted 2004-09-16 12:57 PM


Quality pure quality

Dave

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9 posted 2004-09-16 01:15 PM


I agree with everyone here.  Quality!  You know, I think I know the Owl, or at least someone like it.  Your portrayal is superb.
   A pure pleasure to read!
              miscellanea

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10 posted 2004-09-16 01:23 PM


Wrapped in wholesome melody throughout, Sunshine. One for the daydreamers, me included. Very nice...and thanks for your very nice comments re: my last post here.

The Best,

wayne

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then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

MyHeartofShadows
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11 posted 2004-09-16 08:00 PM


I love this poem lady sunshine, it moves and moves me.  A true pleasure to read.

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12 posted 2004-09-19 08:35 PM


Karelia,
...As only you could portray the beauty of these elusive creatures. You and I are both truly learning what can be hidden where least expected, sometimes the best surprises are those we never expected. Thank you for this and for being the ear that hears this owl's voice.
Hugs

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