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Lonely Shadow
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0 posted 2004-09-15 04:01 PM


Standing in nature’s embrace
In awe of this radiant creature
Who I hold so very close
Losing myself in her beauty
A kiss that was broken
Dreams that are now made real
Such feelings filling my heart
Only knowing that it came
From the one I hold close
Lightheaded, my knees weak
My heart racing for dear life
Unsure of what to say or do
So I draw forth once more
To taste of her lips
And to savor the moment
We shared once more
If I’ve ever known heaven
Before this very moment
I truly know it now
For in my arms I found
Something truly beautiful
And a feeling I thought
I’d never feel again
Love once thought lost
I believe I may have found again
Something real, something true
In the most unlikely of places

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

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1 posted 2004-09-15 04:24 PM


Nicely said, sometimes we step on something
in the dark or have it come to us out of
the blue, and bingo, there we are.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-09-15 07:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
DavePage
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3 posted 2004-09-16 01:30 PM


Depth in here - nice - like it

Dave

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-09-16 01:34 PM


Very very nice...such a warm feeling it left me with.
Good to read you once again.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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