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Open Poetry #33

Night Rainbow

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-14 03:25 PM

Night Rainbow

black eyes served up
on a white china plate
an invitation to dinner
with a water snake
where you swam here
slowly across liquid
skin shedding thinking
you could scare me, but
you do not understand
my fears at all
I am immune to
the poison serpent bite
before bit
respecting those pearls
I traveled here myself
upon former salty waves
and there are rainbows
at night if you look
for I have learned
to float on cloud tears
so rattle all you want
my emotions are not
your prize

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-09-14 03:42 PM

I love it, and bitten by the venom of the words.

Dave

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2004-09-14 04:26 PM

this one takes a second read...

hugs
M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-09-15 10:02 PM

I think your timing of this must have
missed most readers...so BTTT you go!

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2004-09-16 11:28 PM

Your strength bites the soul, in this emotional yet bold piece.

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