navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Something Traditional
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Something Traditional Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917


0 posted 2004-09-14 02:25 PM



With eyes to eyes to smile laugh within a channel of unspoken known feelings

Known of everything you felt stripped in public to and understanding that remains

Inside out but the beans remained within accompanied by a light feeling

You dissolved a feeling of fear hiding beyond a suit portraying your feelings

You remember and you know as I do and this weekend I will try to see


© Copyright 2004 Dave Page - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-14 02:33 PM


...but the beans remained...

~&~

Traditional, and southern style.  Well done,
and Happy Birthday!

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-14 02:57 PM


Thanks Sunshine

57 and never learned.

I just wish I could stop mucking things up like not turning off the tap as I did last night.

We are now all on sidelights but at least we are not being smashed by the winds as your people are - ours are just strong as it travels across the pond.

Anyone affected by the winds you are getting has my respect and thoughts.

dave

Dave

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Something Traditional

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary