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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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The magic behind your eyes is crimson red as I see you the person I knew is no longer there. I look at you and it's just a blank stare. So many things going on in your mind. So little time for be to figure out. I just know this your not who you used to be. Mountains tower over your emotions oceans as deep as the cayon's my feelings for you just grows. very rough just typed it up anyhow what do u think Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Hi... Like you said, it is rough, but there is a good idea here. I write rough poems and then sit and look at them until I can make them smooth. At least they feel smooth to me. :-} |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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