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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-09-13 07:01 AM


Drowsy murmur
Mastery of skills flash
Sprawled in telling tales
Successful abrupt taste
Beautiful in transparent way
Measuring acres
Out blow of breath
Drinking & gambling mornings
Whipping eggs
Moods pregnant
Like a stove corner
Slow-sipping warms brews
Rareness increasing
To another view
Blinking in amazement
Pouch of gold pieces
Undyed white wool
Damp in fragrance
Broadcasting views
Human talk, claiming lanolin
Sweater’s brightening sky

Murmuring
Raking cut grass thru afternoon
Rhythm peers plumage
Against my soles
I am profoundly near collapse
At this insomniac aspect
Commotion, folding small things
Pencils sketching corn discovering
The sea white hem fraying
Numberless basins floating
Botanizing steps forward
Stores, and more stores
Like tree limbs swaying
In moonlight unaccountability
Sugared crepes beyond any
Power of expressions…
Today is the right one…
Heroic heart blood
Eating such a thing
Has become cloth of voice
Canvas of deepened color
Holding captive an invented Holiday
Forever...


An inspiration written from a tremendous photograph of the sea, one of which a friend gave me...wish so, I knew how to post pictures with my poems, so as to share the rare beauty of this beautiful moment.

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-09-13 07:39 AM


LeeJ
Now that is quite a moment. Good morning sweet.

ecrivan
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Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2004-09-13 07:58 PM


a trmendously late good morning, good have sampled some of my maple syrup on those pancakes? enjoyed read


ecrivan
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my own state
3 posted 2004-09-13 07:58 PM


a trmendously late good morning, good have sampled some of my maple syrup on those pancakes? enjoyed read


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-09-13 08:22 PM


Very much enjoyed Lee...
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
5 posted 2004-09-13 08:29 PM


Lee,
  It is so good to ride the wind with you once again.  You splash the imagery upon me!
I love it, especially your first verse.
                miscellanea

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-09-14 01:08 AM


you really don't need pictures with your writings....you're that good
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