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Call Your Mother
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Call Your Mother |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ If I were to miss tomorrow without tending to the meadow where you flourish would you call on me then remembering when, and plant a rose garden. Can you possibly imagine how I break apart when you all but shatter the distance between us. Do I simply not exist anymore because I'm no longer there. Just like my phone number wasn't added to your emergency card, am I to be the person you love last an afterthought after it's past would I be worthy, years from now. When looking back on the passage of time would you understand my pain and the dying landscape of my soul, and the depth of which you bind me to it. Would you then refer to me by name and call your mother. ~*~ Sorry, I'm just having a crappy day over here~ Ten four, over and out! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Words in search of assurance and acknowledgement. I hope it's forthcoming. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, I can well-imagine you are having a less than pleasant day, with such feelings of abandonment and not being appreciated. May the phone ring soon with a loving voice telling you how much you really are loved and missed. They get so caught up in their own lives that time slips by so quickly! Loving hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Heart hugs Bluesy....this one aches. ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sending heart hugs too |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*big hugs* nicely written  and then He created the horse... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, I can feel this, Bluesy. Yes, we all have "those" days and it's good to write it out but then again, maybe it just entrenches it even more. Something for me to think about. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Do I simply not exist anymore because I'm no longer there. gosh, i hear you....... calll your mother, your sister, your aunt, your wife, your best friend.... we can put on our spins on this, the thing is the feeling plain stinks when we feel it. cheer up girlie, we here you. waffles anyone ? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It is such a good feeling, when those we love take a moment to call and let us know that we are in their thoughts...a simple thankyou, or a smile of encouragement, are the giant things which move us into meters of harmony... Hugs and good thoughts sent your way |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahh hon....this tugs and I can feel the pain... and gawd gal...I wish I could call my mom....  you are so very beautiful... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
So often writing the words of your pain can give healing...I hope the writing of this poem has helped...your pain touches all who read this...**hugs** |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There's no quiet like an unrung phone. Somewhere, someone longs to call you. Nicely written. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
No, Lori this is good you just made me realize that I need to appreciate my own mother more . . . Thank you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for being here you guys, I really needed that! (could you tell) These days are so hard on me, although I know my situation isn't unique. It's just so much worse when, "you are there" |
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