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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-09-12 04:18 PM



We wear our distance as a
second skin.

As if joined by the space that
falls between us.

And every motion reaches as a
soft caress.

In distance...

We spread our fingers to
the night.

Sure of this connection.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2004-09-12 04:30 PM


As if joined by the space that
falls between us.

What a heady feeling, as if two people are suspended as one in love.

Always enjoy reading you, Ericc~



Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-09-12 04:43 PM


"We wear our distance as a
second skin.

As if joined by the space that
falls between us."

Beautiful Eric...simply beautiful!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-09-12 05:36 PM


Oh WOW!!!

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
4 posted 2004-09-12 05:48 PM


Lovely, as your beautiful words always are...

~tier

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-12 06:33 PM


Sigh - lovely

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kristabell
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Portland, OR
6 posted 2004-09-12 10:09 PM


Very sweet. I enjoyed this.


Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2004-09-13 12:30 PM


I'm keeping this gem. Thanks!
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-09-13 01:00 AM


whew
LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-09-13 07:42 AM


oh boy, this was like a happy wving hand, laughing and full of contentment..
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2004-09-13 09:09 AM


I sure do enjoy how you express your lovin' feelings! I surely do!

Love & Light,
Linda

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