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The Flame Returns
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The Flame Returns |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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I am the cosmic storm, Dark passions form. And the flame returns... Here there's no work or play, Only one bill to pay. And the flame returns... I am war I am pain, Self righteous reign. And the flame returns... I am the fear in the night, Dive right into the fight. The flame returns... Here I go, To let the world know. The flame has returned... I can't take It's hollow words, Listen to the singing birds. And the flame...returns... As the Flame consumes me, The world will start to see. The flame is life and has returned... One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
sounds like a song - Jewel has a song about people being like a flame -it was pretty good |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
We all start from somewhere Dave |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Hotflakes! Sounds like you've returned hotter than ever!   EA |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Wow. No one should have to live in an inward battle. Nice write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Great write kiddo...you just get better and better |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Powerful and heartfelt...very strong... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice Kyle....well done! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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