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Fetal Fight elaborated

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2004-09-12 01:59 PM

Cay someone help me git rid of the previous version of this article?

Fetal Fight

by Jaime Fradera

Fetal Fight

Tonight, on ZBS Media …
Fetal Fight;
In which sibling twin rifalry
Interrupts the tranquility
Of life inside the womb.
Preview:
… No! No! give me that thing!
You know what I think?
I think you ought to be miscarried.
That’s what I think.
Don’t go calling me a malformed zygote
You stinking flatus’s!
You fish bag!
Haven’t you been to school yet?
Those gills!
You fish head!
Don’t you even have a brain yet? …
You know,
There ain’t ‘ nuf room
On this here placenta
Fer both of us! …
Okay, Draw! … Draw!
You organ bag!
Don’t you even know what “draw” is? …

So if he wakes you with his kicking,
You may know why you were dreaming. .

SC

What’s weird, man, you ever seen a guy with eyes in his feet?

All that you are seeking is also seeking you

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-12 02:54 PM

Gads- I love this humor - thanks for the chuckle!

Susan

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-09-12 04:07 PM

I guess sibling rivalry starts earlier than I ever imagined!
Laughing here, knowing I've heard some of this conversation before.
Your imagination takes you into the darndest places, where most weathermen fear to tread. LOL

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-09-12 04:22 PM

Thank you for the laugh!

~Alli~

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Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

4 posted 2004-09-12 10:16 PM

So sad, though.

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