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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-07-10 07:16 AM


Oasis of the soul

In the footsteps of my fate
Lies the mutate of my goal
Burning fuels acumen freight
Filling the order of my soul.

Within the mist of fantasy
Bordering horizons find
I sail into the mystery
To see within the dark of mind

Shambala is a state of being
A match struck within the dark
Phantoms fantasy of seeing
The bearing of a moments spark

And within that moments glow
Lies the essence of the core
The eternity of the flow
A moment of forevermore

Shambala is our Shangri-la
It’s all the near and all the far.



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-07-10 07:27 AM


YES. We ARE on the road to shambala.
Well, some of us are.

YOU, are already there.

hmm.

But why do I need a BLACK hammer?

(frigging weirdo me.)



love ya sy...


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-07-10 07:44 AM


serenity,
A black hammer just means you're not sure of what's happening. The color can be changed with an attitude change.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2004-07-10 07:45 AM


Well?

what the hell?

I'll give it a shot!

thanks sweets!

yer a beauty you are

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-07-10 07:51 AM


serenity,
Love you too.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-07-10 08:54 AM


My hammer was blue...
and shaped like a pen...

I suppose I suppose
it would even write a rose...




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6 posted 2004-07-10 08:58 AM


In the footsteps of my fate
Lies the mutate of my goal
Burning fuels acumen freight
Filling the order of my soul.

===============================

Takes a wise and humble man to know the goal.


Burning fuels acumen freight


and how cool can one line's intend be??  


As always your rhymes are on the money me dear poetic prophet.

Just got back from a bike ride...Randy steers while I take pics. *L*

*ww*


I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

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7 posted 2004-07-10 09:08 AM


Wonderful morning read Sy!
You most certainly leave us with some fantastic words of wisdom each morn.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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8 posted 2004-07-10 09:15 AM


OH Shaman of the forest green
whose visions not all have seen
Would thou give perhaps a chance
to see beyond,  to have a glance.

You are so wise...and we are such
babes,  still learning...

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9 posted 2004-07-10 01:57 PM


Wow...!!!!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-07-10 02:29 PM


Sunshine
Your pressure was your pen.
Hugs

JM,
Randy steered your bike? That's a first
Glad your happy with the bike and camera.
As always I loved your comment.


Nancy,
Love ya, hugs

Barry,
I'm sitting on the same fence. LOL

Ericc
Thanks for the WOW.

iliana
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11 posted 2004-07-10 04:04 PM


"And within that moments glow
Lies the essence of the core
The eternity of the flow
A moment of forevermore

Shambala is our Shangri-la
It’s all the near and all the far."

I heart that match strike for just a moment when I read this one.  Enjoyed your thoughts, Seymour.......jo

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-07-10 05:29 PM


iliana
Enjoyed your reply, thank you.

Susan
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13 posted 2004-07-10 06:18 PM


In the breath of a moment's silence, bliss is found within the stillness.  Yes, the true essence of the soul can indeed be an oasis.  Enjoyed the read.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-07-10 07:26 PM


Susan
Thank you for the read and comment.

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15 posted 2004-07-12 10:12 AM


I saw your title and thought... I need one of those! *S*

And I always need a Sy-read... thank you! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2004-07-12 12:18 PM


suthern
We can all use one. Thank you sweety.

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17 posted 2004-07-12 12:36 PM


very kewl!
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2004-07-12 12:41 PM


passing,
That means you won't pass me bye? LOL

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2007-08-18 10:41 PM


Nice...James
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20 posted 2007-10-27 05:51 PM


wonderful

ARCTIC WIND

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