Open Poetry #33 |
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This Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
This Day I roll inward today not wanting to feel the faded. When drained, I search the night air for the coming of tomorrow always wondering will it bring me some peace of mind in the silent night show. Inside lingers the doubts that scar the spirit and douse the lavender skies with hues towards the dark. Today I wake painless, the releasing of, easier than yesterday, though the moments remembering cannot pass without notice and my heart, heavy for the loss. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at this beautiful new photo... and look who remembers with all her heart! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can't see my new photo...for some reason and I just emptied my cache...though, I did try to smile for a change ![]() ![]() M ahhhh..it took this response to show me up *s yuppp..that's me |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
Waking painless does take a bit of time and Im glad you reached that point and I see the smile even if you cant. Thats the way with smiles, put one on for the others to see. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Inside lingers the doubts that scar the spirit" Yes. Well said. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry floats across the page leaving spectacular patterns that whisper in the shadows. Beautifully done and heartfelt, Maureen~ Love that smile! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what it takes to carry a heavy heart...you are strong |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
MyHeartofShadows *s...thank you ..I have had a sad week..culminating in thoughts of today. icebox, well I hope someday some scars can heal enough...Thank you for your thoughts. Lori, ![]() M Dixie,hope you are weather proofed... and thanks ![]() M |
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