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sim0riah
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0 posted 2004-09-09 07:46 PM


So simple yet so complete
Glistening eyes, beautiful smile
and her thoughts of love
as true as the heavens above

Innocent charm
A lasting look
a true soul of devotion
As beautiful as the still ocean

Enlightens my being
sets fire to my soul
Never knew love like this
Could really exsist

As beautiful as a new dawning day
I'm speachless with no words to say
Today I know, complete is my life
I thank you so much, For being my wife

Sim0riah


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Elan
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1 posted 2004-09-09 07:59 PM


Thank you, for sharing this beautiful expression!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-09-09 08:06 PM


How lucky your wife is to have this written by you for her....
Beautiful piece!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

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with you
3 posted 2004-09-09 10:31 PM


can you teach my hubby to write like this??
very nice

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4 posted 2004-09-09 10:48 PM


i hope she has seen these lovely words of yours
sim0riah
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5 posted 2004-09-10 09:38 AM


Thank you all for the nice compliments..I'm gonna email it to her this morning

sim0riah

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