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For Karen’s Serenity
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For Karen’s Serenity |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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For Karen’s Serenity I saw him standing there so lacking and he saw in me something he didn’t possess so his fingers grabbed at the silverness as to unwrap the edges to have the center as his own he picked chipping in his power he tried to take my choice but it all melted to silence when he thought he took my voice "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes I wonder when people think of karma if they only thing of the bad things in their life. Just now, I read this and thought, "surely, I must have done something right..."  thank you  and we are going to have such a good time when we meet "someday".  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
hey, i love you too ya know |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, this was great! And just a good response to Karen's poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shirley...she does something right... she surely does... both Karen...AND Helen... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful...and beautifuly expressed. Eric |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well done! |
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