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"Jump In"
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"Jump In" |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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I wached you swim in my lake. ripples formed from your presence So what ever did you brake? Now gone, still there's your essence. You left and went far away and followed from where you came Funny, I still wished you'd stay The lake will not be the same Your image stays reflected up above the clouded sky But still I feel affected; the ripples began to die. When all of the ripples fade I hope you will jump back in so I won't be as afraid My lakes not shallow like skin Juju |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Funny how certain people make ripples within us, and how sorely that stirring can be missed. This is how I feel these words.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this one, Juju.....loved your metaphors.  ......jo |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Woops....... I missed a verse.... Oh well.......... Not that big of a deal. JUju |
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