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Soon...Time Crosses Sand
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Soon...Time Crosses Sand |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Soon…Time Crosses Sand Moments from now…I count them, not by weeks, or days…but valuable, non-expendable moments, for very soon, it might be, that I may be able to see a life before infinity takes over, lay a kiss upon her cheek, offer a celebratory bon voyage that she have an eternity’s trip… one she has been waiting for, years, now, and then, then, there will be a time for me, alone, to stand, adrift; though, still, I will feel hands cross my heart, lift my chin, then soon and afterwards, time will cross sand… One could damn choices made, but then who would hold one against one’s self, one’s free will and acknowledge…I did this to myself; ergo, free will equals, equates, connects responsibility, hand in hand with requisite need, and have; foregoing want, and desire, for some. Soon, soon enough, time crosses sand, in realizing we cannot do all we wish for all we love; while failure rears its head; one could be sorrowful; one could sit down, and stop. Just, stop. But breath, my breath, is taken in; I still live, I live, feeling a need to hold my own; my own… for soon, too soon, time crosses sand sand has a way of moving… moving has a way of crossing, and soon, it too, has a way of coming… ~*~ and in coming across sands of time, one day, long ago, I stepped across a threshold and was welcomed… welcomed into a place of hope, and life, friendship, and circles, ripples, and family… Once again, a threshold has been crossed… time has spun on, and I smile, an inner smile, an outward grin…this is a home, this is a place where I thank God, each and every day… time crosses sand… soon enough. ~*~ Dedicated…to my Family, as well as to the Wizard… and his Family of Friends. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now you made me want to go to the beach! A beautiful write, Karilea, and one to think about before the next sandman visit. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The sands of time... Beautiful dear lady..just like your heart. Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Came back my hip-sis to say congrats on 48,000 posts!!!  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
for soon, too soon, time crosses sand sand has a way of moving… moving has a way of crossing, and soon, it too, has a way of coming… Wonderful Karilea, sister of my heart. Congrats by the way.  Chrislane"At one glance |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh yes...every word, including the ones you didn't say. This is simply masterful. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"then, there will be a time for me, alone, to stand, adrift; though, still, I will feel hands cross my heart, lift my chin, then soon and afterwards, time will cross sand…" yes, congrats on the milestone.... I love this |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhh WOW Karilea such beauty and depth in this....very touching....congrats lady on all your words hugsssss you much luv tooo I don’t want the world to see me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful dedication indeed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful Karilea. Wonderful words. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
One could damn choices made, but then who would hold one against one’s self, one’s free will and acknowledge…I did this to myself; Mum? I'm keeping this. You KNOW I love everything you write, but this.... IWIHWT!  Gawd, you soaryou shining lady  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
AMEN!!! Lovely and magnificand view you widen for us to see. This was a close encounter with a master piece...so elegant and rare, as your heart duplicates your soft eyes, long eyelashes and very wide forehead. Extraordinary! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
One could damn choices made, but then who would hold one against one’s self, one’s free will and acknowledge…I did this to myself; You forever make me grateful that time and sands intersected for us... Beautiful work!!! |
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