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Open Poetry #33

Tip toeing a maze of

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-08 04:17 PM

Tip toeing a maze of
Mushrooms potatoes to cook
In a thicket of haze
Dreams of
A sauce
Bathing tomatoes, noodles, mince meat
To taste a bud
With maybe a hint
Of evening
And nothing else

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2004-09-08 04:31 PM

Oh, we HAVE missed you.
I do like the images
you trace into the
blue pages.

Daniel Storm
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 91
New York

2 posted 2004-09-08 04:37 PM

This sounds like last night's dinner

an intersting read.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-09-08 05:20 PM

just a hint of evening, please.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2004-09-08 05:34 PM

like your wording a bunch: a thicket of haze,

With maybe a hint
Of evening
And nothing else

sounds like you've cooked up a nice combo

miscellanea

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-09-08 06:48 PM

Now, that sounds like some good stuff!!

......jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (09-08-2004 08:27 PM).]

time prophet
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

6 posted 2004-09-08 07:08 PM

Sounds a bit like an evening meal for one, quiet evening alone, some good taste in there.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-09-08 07:12 PM

You make cooking sound nice - and that's a compliment, believe me

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-09-08 07:28 PM

Hey Dave!

It's nice to see you back again. I have been absent myself but it's nice to see you here.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

9 posted 2004-09-08 08:13 PM

Thanks all

Dave

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