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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2004-09-08 12:07 PM

Oh shining star
So peaceful and bright
Lead me through this path
With your brilliant light

Rain down on me your quietness
of your darkest night
And encourage me your meaning
of your wonderous light

Deny me my frustration
from my weary day
And enlighten my thoughts
to turn a lovely way

As I gaze to the heavens
Entranced by your sparkling light
I only hope and pray
I'm not your only sight

For a star that can shine
with no end in sight
Might just enlighten us the meaning
of a peaceful night

Oh shining star
So peaceful and bright

sim0riah

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Member Seraphic

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1 posted 2004-09-08 01:43 PM

I like this very much... like the peace it leaves! *S* Welcome to Passions! *S*

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with you

2 posted 2004-09-08 01:55 PM

"Deny me my frustration
from my weary day
And enlighten my thoughts
to turn a lovely way"

Very nicely done!

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-09-08 02:23 PM

Just lovely. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-09-08 02:41 PM

Like it

It's essence of Peter Pan and Christmas

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-09-08 02:57 PM

Lovely lovely...soft and lyrical..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2004-09-10 05:43 PM

Stars are for wishing upon, if you make a wish, it just might come true

Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-09-10 07:19 PM

Silky...James

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